the creature of cassidy's creek

This is a cool writing piece 

There was a monster he jumped onto sebastian’s back. The monster was so hungry so sebastian had to run really fast. The monster was getting tired and so was sebastian  so then sebastian stopped...

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speech for 2017

Hi my name is chloe king, today             I’m going to talk to you about why smoking should be banned

So what i'm going to be talking about today is some facts about smoking so let's get into the facts...

Fact 1: did you know that Smoking causes 1 in every 5 deaths in the U.S. every year.

Fact 2: A single cigarette contains over 4,800 chemicals, 69 of which are known to kill.

Fact 3: Every day, nearly 4000 teens in the u.s. smoke their first cigarette while 1,000 start smoking on a daily basis.

Fact 4: and did you know that Smoking costs the U.S. $333 billion per year in health-care expenses and lost productivity to boot.

Fact 5: Exposure to Secondhand smoke causes nearly 50,000 deaths each year in the U.S. alone.   

Fact 6: 15   billion cigarettes

are smoked

worldwide

every day and about 69% of smokers want to quit completely but just they can’t.

Fact 7: The first European who learned to smoke from the natives was arrested back home because people thought he was possessed by the devil.

Fact 8: The study of more than 200,000 people, published this week in BMC medicine, found about 67 percent of smokers perished from smoking-related illness. That rate is higher than doctors previously estimated.

So that is why i think smoking should be banned and kids tell your parents and your grandparents and all so don’t smoke cigarettes kids it is bad.

facts about earth

The Earth's rotation is gradually slowing. ...

• The Earth was once believed to be the centre of the universe. ...
• Earth has a powerful magnetic field. ...
• There is only one natural satellite of the planet Earth. ...
• Earth is the only planet not named after a god. ...
• The Earth is the densest planet in the Solar System.

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Roald Dahl Shared Writing Week 7

Chloe’s Narrative

It was the day the moon fell to earth...when it fell it went down with a big bang! Everyone got there kids and ran to the nearest place underneath the earth, we call those things shelters, in their families from all around the world came to settle in. When the moon fell to earth everyone screamed and yelled, some people even thought that they may die...that day, it was a desire for nonly New Zealand, but the whole entire world!

Civilization changed in the world as the days became longer and brighter  as the moon was no longer darkening our cities and countries. We only got a little bit of a sleep as the sun was so bright, we wake up to bright morning days rather than dark mornings and nights. We all came to a good decision we were going to move to mars so we moved into the spaceship to go to mars so they all came to mars and they lived there and built heaps of buildings, they lived happily  ever after.

Roald Dahl Shared Writing Week 4

​He pushed his hand into the carved hand-print on the rock, there was a rumble from beneath his feet and then it opened… he fell into a giant's mouth called the blood bogler, the giant called all the other giants to eat the people in the human world.

Then the people of the human world got eaten by the giant’s but only one person survived and that person was freed the boy from the start was so inspired he wrote all about it, and he said’’ I will make another book”.

The end

This was our narrative story prompt