I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Chloe! My name is Antonette and I'm a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's School. I really liked the way you made your title interesting and how you used the word "crafty" in your title. Maybe next time you could make the x's at the top ticks because that's what you should write in a comment not what you would not write in a comment. I am excited to see more work from you Chloe!
Hi Antonette, my name is Chloe and im a year 4 and thank you and have you read my speech yet, if you have please don't smoke when you are older, if you haven't go check it out and sorry that i did not reply to you early i was busy but from now on i will check my blog everyday and i want to know some of your friends names and all, so have you ever tried a traffic light. From Chloe p.s. i go to yaldhurst school.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question. 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?
Hi Chloe! My name is Antonette and I'm a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's School. I really liked the way you made your title interesting and how you used the word "crafty" in your title. Maybe next time you could make the x's at the top ticks because that's what you should write in a comment not what you would not write in a comment. I am excited to see more work from you Chloe!
ReplyDeleteHi Antonette, my name is Chloe and im a year 4 and thank you and have you read my speech yet, if you have please don't smoke when you are older, if you haven't go check it out and sorry that i did not reply to you early i was busy but from now on i will check my blog everyday and i want to know some of your friends names and all, so have you ever tried a traffic light. From Chloe p.s. i go to yaldhurst school.
Deletehi chloe im kya from sockburn school i just wanted to say great no amazing job
ReplyDeleteHello Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have written that positive means make a connection. It reminds me of my aunty because I havnt seen her in a long time.