I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Apart of our blogging lesson mrs spragg is helping us learn how to post and why we should post.
This is a test to see who is reading my blog. Can you please comment for me to see who is reading? I can't wait to read your feedback comments.
So Chloe I am one person who is reading your blog. Good luck with it this year. I don't know how hard it is for you to remember the capital letters to start sentences. I think they will make it look even better. The main thing is having interesting posts like speeches about smoking, science etc.
Hi there Dave it is chloe from yms school thank you for commenting on my blog it is so wonderful to see people on mt blog I will put capital letters in now.
I really enjoyed this blog post and that you put in your favorite songs. Next time maybe think about what colour font you are using because on the first it was really hard to read. Also maybe add more info about yourself like how many family members you have. Otherwise I think that this a really good blog post.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question. 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?
So Chloe I am one person who is reading your blog. Good luck with it this year. I don't know how hard it is for you to remember the capital letters to start sentences. I think they will make it look even better. The main thing is having interesting posts like speeches about smoking, science etc.
ReplyDeleteHi there Dave it is chloe from yms school thank you for commenting on my blog it is so wonderful to see people on mt blog I will put capital letters in now.
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DeleteI have put capital letter in. Thank you for giving me feedback on my post.
DeleteCool Chloe. I am excited to see that you have 2 posts already. I hope you have a great week at school.
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this blog post and that you put in your favorite songs.
Next time maybe think about what colour font you are using because on the first it was really hard to read. Also maybe add more info about yourself like how many family members you have. Otherwise I think that this a really good blog post.
Bree
Yaldhurst model school